So until now, I have basically just been posting the ad straight out of the catalog into this slot and then filling in a little more. But in an effort to improve my writing, editing and publishing skills, I am now going to read the ad, and re write it in my own words and then provide a review. So here goes, for all my many many followers. (cough)! There you see Winkel in young Luca's hand, he might even be a little old for it, if flys nicely like a ball then. And bounces quite well. It is pliable plastic coloured loops that are easy to grasp. Can be refridgerated for a cooling teether as well, very versatile. Bright colors and even the youngest of children will like this. Cheers for now, don't forget to chose Carolyn Staples as your Kidsmart Rep.
So until now, I have basically just been posting the ad straight out of the catalog into this slot and then filling in a little more. But in an effort to improve my writing, editing and publishing skills, I am now going to read the ad, and re write it in my own words and then provide a review. So here goes, for all my many many followers. (cough)! There you see Winkel in young Luca's hand, he might even be a little old for it, if flys nicely like a ball then. And bounces quite well. It is pliable plastic coloured loops that are easy to grasp. Can be refridgerated for a cooling teether as well, very versatile. Bright colors and even the youngest of children will like this. Cheers for now, don't forget to chose Carolyn Staples as your Kidsmart Rep.
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